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Yo, welcome to my second game, Camp Creator Version 1. I added a "version 1" here because maybe you can review my game and tell me where i can improve on! :D
I love warrior cats
alright,i guess if you want a review and advice i can see what i can give you, i haven't been generous enough lately with helping people, been to busy o_o. First off, I've certainly seen worse on this site, lol, and secondly while its not much of a game, it's at-least on the creative side. I'd suggest a few things to improve, obviously, simple practice. keep drawing and practicing with flash and you will improve. no way around that one, but you do want your aesthetics to be pleasing and gentle on the eyes. it takes time to get a consistent style in any image, so don't fret. other than that i would suggest perhaps creating a music selector, I'm hardly a programer, so i have only a vague idea of how to do that, but I'm sure the internet can provide where i cannot. and i would suggest with the buttons, smooth them out and make sure that they line up together, the left and right buttons of each button set seem to be higher or lower than the button that should be on the same line. having something that is visually linear is always appealing (asymmetry for buttons and layout like that is often hard to make a good thing)
that's all i can really think of to improve this type of game, but with anything, practice, patience and passion. that's how you do it. good luck to your future endeavors.
It's like a dressup game, only not. I liked the pile of dead animals, but the meager selection of actual camps, seemed pretty ratty. And it's hard to choose between a camp and a pet/food. Good selection of backgrounds and trees.
Its not bad. I actually rather like the idea of making your own camp. Plus the option of having your own pet/guardian/wild animal visitor in the camp was great to. My only real complaint is the lack of having a fire pit and at least a sleeping bag or a tent of some kind. Even a basic one would have been awesome. Other then that awesome job. I hope you make a version 2.
Oh! :O I'm sorry i didn't think of adding a fire place, but what i actually meant was to create a Clan Camp for a series called Warrior Cats. But of course I'll create a version 2.
kinda boring its too easy and it coulda done with more effort
An interactive story of love and adventure
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