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There's not gonna be a description for 1 level is there. Wait until the WHOLE game comes out!
First of all, i want to say that this game could be promising. It depends on what you're gonna do with the story and the game itself!
Then, It is kinda weird to play just one lvl with even a description.. It would be better if you explained that this is a trailversion of a game you're making..
And finally, a Mute button is always usefull :) or just put it in the settingsscreen :)
Good luck, this could become great game :)
This is a pretty pointless submission - it's just a tutorial for a not-entirely-revolutionary platformer. The only gimmicks this has are the dialogue - littered with spelling mistakes, by the way (Oxygen, not Oxegan; Because, not becuase) - and the clicking - woo.
Also, if at any point you push space when you aren't told to, the game loops. This is a serious bug - or at least it would be if this was an actual game. Don't post the tutorial as some sort of interest check, because it just ends up getting bad reviews because it's completely pointless - build at least one level first if you have to.
There's not gonna be a review for level 1 is there. I'll wait until the WHOLE game comes out!
Seriously though, I have absolutely no idea what this game is about or why I should even play the full game. 1 star for mediocre art and dialogue. I'd suggest not using the arrowkeys/mouse combination, it's awkward because I use my right hand for both. Maybe add a wsad option if you want the mouse.
Try to determine what would make the game fun, implement it and then ask people for their opinions :)
Well, when will the game be finished, It's boring having to play the preview i must say
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