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The kid going down the slide in the background was a nice touch :)
One recommendation would be more dialogue.Something with more substance (have the dog playing catch or something, gets into a fight with another dog, and the owner has to deal with it....I don't know just ideas). Good start-has potential.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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