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Mar 30, 2013 | 8:56 PM EDT
  • Daily 5th Place April 1, 2013

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Author Comments

Hey, Newgrounds.
This cartoon made in 6 days.
I know, it's little shitty. But I hope, you like it.
Have a nice day :3

Reviews


KillingyoutwiceKillingyoutwice

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars April 21, 2013

While there were parts of the flash that were good, there were too many aspects that I couldn't overlook that make the flash just mediocre. The story was very cute albeit a bit cliche and the art style, while rough, complements the cuteness of the story.

The music is a difficult subject for me. On one hand, the main theme goes along nicely with the flash and adds to the overall theme. On the other hand, when the main theme cut out and played Jefferson Airplane, the shift was very jarring and the cut away only lasted for a few seconds and went back to the song which is again another jarring transition.

I think that's the overall crux of why this flash doesn't work. The pacing is way too fast, and it doesn't tread any new ground. If the flash were slower and had just that little extra amount of care to push it over the edge, the flash would have been great.

2.5/5

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ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you for great review!
Now I'm working very hard on new cartoon.
I took into account all the disadvantages. And I think it would be a big step forward


CyberdevilCyberdevil

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 8, 2013

This is a feelgood short... and not so short either. Some expressions look a bit weird, like how the girls eyes just blank out instead of closing when she's kissin him (that's what it looks like) and how he suddenly looks old and wrinkled after the run, but overall it's nice. The music fits perfectly and it's a pleasure to watch, all happy and... perfect. Keep it going!

-cd-


ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you, man!
Your opinion is important for me :)
P.S.
The problem is I did it as soon as possible.
This is reflected in the quality of the work itself -_-
It's my mistake. I'll try focus on quality of animation and graphics next time


awesomeblaze1029awesomeblaze1029

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 3, 2013

it was ok,but it's clear that idolness caused this


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ArcadeHero responds:

Thanks...
Maybe. I'm a little cold for it. It's only for pass open round contest.
But now, i'm working on my new cartoon.
I hope that you enjoy.
It will be a different format.


NEZUENEZUE

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars April 1, 2013

The animation could be worked on and how did he miss the bus when it was right there?


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ArcadeHero responds:

Thanks for review!
He was distracted by the fallen phone :)


09CArventos09CArventos

Rated 4 / 5 stars April 1, 2013

Heh,
This was a nice story.


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ArcadeHero responds:

Thanks!
But I think it's little bit commonplace plot ;(