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Mar 26, 2013 | 6:53 PM EDT

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My first animation that I have actually completed. Also my first animation here :D

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TheDLRTheDLR

Rated 3 / 5 stars April 2, 2013

I'm only going to review this because I've pretty much done the same thing.
First, add a preloader. We don't want it to keep looping even if it is a loop. There's already one somewhere on this site, you should use it.
Second, you overuse motion blurs way too much. Even though it is convenient, learn to do it frame by frame. It'll look more smoother and natural.
Third, it would be extremely helpful if you learn how to scroll the camera and background properly; the way it's set into a fixed position doesn't look right. Try something like a "1-2-3-3-2-1" motion.
I might look pretty hypocritical right now, but that's because experience helps.



umzgamesumzgames

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 29, 2013

I liked it. What is that rolling move link does though LoL and when he puts up the sword always reminds me of Thundercats.



mujekmujek

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 27, 2013

Link is an awesome character to play with.. I always enjoy watching him in animations here on NewGround.. Great job you did with your first animation, keep 'em coming bro!!


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deadcatinthestreetdeadcatinthestreet

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 27, 2013

I understand its a test, but its not exatly... well anything, really. The animation is neat, I like the pixles, and the fluid motion is awesome, but it just loops over and over with link beating the shit out of a sandbag. New? Exciting? No. No. You said this is your first "completed", I wouldn't consider it complete. Work harder, make it unique, take things that someone has done, or creat your own, but whichever you do, always improve.

What needs to be said: This is a drastic step backwards. And you haven't even taken a step forward yet. You have talent, DO SOMETHING WITH IT!

3/5. And Im being nice with this score.


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CentralCarnage responds:

Thanks for the tips dude, I appreciate the honest review. c:


giobot123456789giobot123456789

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 27, 2013

no,just no.ik this is your first movie,but u need to 2 put more work ethic into this


CentralCarnage responds:

Thanks for the review, but I'm not sure what you mean by work ethic. Is that in its short or something?