could be better.

This was a pretty mediocre game, but it's a definite improvement from your first one, I can tell that you've learned a bit, the art is a little better, and you added music, which made playing it a little more enjoyable. However, for your next game I would like to make some suggestions:

1.Make it longer, it took me like 20 seconds to complete this.

2. Get some one better at drawing to do the art, it would make the game seem more like some effort has been put into it, and make it more enjoyable overall. I'm sorry but drawing just isn't your talent (it's ok, I can't draw either)

3. Come up with a better story, it doesn't have to be great, but just something that I can invest myself in a little.

4. Maybe add some more sound effects.

I probably seem very negative, but I do think you have potential, you just need to put some more effort into making your games, and they could be great.

welllllll

Well, understandably just an experimental game, but the animation was pretty bad, there was (2?) keys in the first room, pretty much no story, and poor graphics. Work on those, maybe add an interesting plot, more depth to the game, and it could be better. Still, better than anything I could make :P

wow just wow