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THIS GAME may be short, but pretty cool. It is in the point-and-click/experimen tal genre
could be better.
Man what's wrong with you?
Im getting really tired of these shitty 10 second long games. The creators think its funny, buts its not. At all.
I do not think it is funny you stupid butthead. IF YOU CAN NOT READ!!! IT SAYS /EXPERIMENTAL GENRE!!!
THIS IS MY SECOND GAME ON NEWGROUNDS!!!!!!!!!!
me as a kid: meh me now:what the fuck is this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!! nothing has changed
This was a pretty mediocre game, but it's a definite improvement from your first one, I can tell that you've learned a bit, the art is a little better, and you added music, which made playing it a little more enjoyable. However, for your next game I would like to make some suggestions:
1.Make it longer, it took me like 20 seconds to complete this.
2. Get some one better at drawing to do the art, it would make the game seem more like some effort has been put into it, and make it more enjoyable overall. I'm sorry but drawing just isn't your talent (it's ok, I can't draw either)
3. Come up with a better story, it doesn't have to be great, but just something that I can invest myself in a little.
4. Maybe add some more sound effects.
I probably seem very negative, but I do think you have potential, you just need to put some more effort into making your games, and they could be great.
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