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03-24-13 – 01-18-15

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This is my first RPG game, plz comment

My website: www.kendercraft.com
my youtube(danish): www.youtube.com/user/Over PowMan

Reviews


Rrachel-chanRrachel-chan

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Hey! I was wondering.. how did you made it? I mean, with which programs? I'd love to know, since over all, the graphics looks really cute


SinStainedDemonSinStainedDemon

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

the graphics in the house need to be fixed but with more dedication and a story it would make a great game


JackofPojoJackofPojo

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Definitely needs work, the backgrounds of elements overlap when they should be transparent, no clear controls or goals, movement feels laggy, and sluggish, this definitely needs to be looked into, seems like little more then a test of movement, and entrance detection, you really should have been more ambitious with your first draft, especially when using a third party tool, but please keep working on it, I can't wait to see what it will become.


GamerGuy777GamerGuy777

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

By "test" you mean nothing is done, right?


ExedorExedor

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

What you have is not good. Sorry. This is nowhere near demo stage, much less being finished, and that makes it pointless.

Please don't submit tests to the Portal. This isn't the place for this. The Portal is for finished items only. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.

http://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/he lp-information/content-submission

Good luck! :)


DesmadelovexDesmadelovex

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This was actually nice. Try putting a story. Monsters, or something like that would be nice. Oh and walking diagonally (if you get me) would be good. Keep it up, good luck on your other games! :)


sneakking12sneakking12

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing job bro!(People this is a test not an actual game)


RazorSoldierRazorSoldier

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Well, is nothing special becouse you can only walk and move to other screen. The things you must do to improve and complete it are:
- Fix the graphics bugs (there is no animation when you walk down and up and some objects are in a weird white background)
- Put something to interactive.
- Put some menus.
- Walk in diagonal.
And you should post it in the forum first, I hope this can help you.


ColonelV0lgin123ColonelV0lgin123

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Need to work, but 4 stars.


MrccbirdguyMrccbirdguy

Rated 1 / 5 stars

This needs tons of work. (I'm not even sure why you submitted it as there's no real game mechanism behind this.) First off, your graphics are somewhat decent, except for going into buildings and everything is crappily rendered or cut and paste with white borders. It has no RPG elements to it.
My suggestion: Take this thing down, And work on your idea. Keeping this thing up only lowers your gaming score and makes you look like you don't know what you are doing. Come back when you have something definitely worth submitting. Good Luck.


Vegeta1389Vegeta1389

Rated 0 / 5 stars

2 words ABSOULTE SHIT!!!


letgo123letgo123

Rated 5 / 5 stars

awesome for a test


CreepLordCreepLord

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I think that posting this here was an absolutely waste of time as there is like no point of playing it.
I would take it off just till you get some actual game mechanism as right now it gives your name bad reputation and lots of negative reviews.
Beside that i think that your graphics are neat (except for the objects in the house with white boarders) and that the movement of the player is good too. All other things are poop


angelic29angelic29

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

If you're going to make a test game at least put more action to it . The only thing you do is just walk around which you can do it in real life . The graphics are all right but the gameplay just sucks really bad . It looks like it came from Pokemon but worse . And the houses are crap . You can't even go up to it . There's a stupid border around it for no reason . This game is a piece of crap. You should redesign everything . Even the character . The character looks like a green slime that has shoes. At least make the character . PERIOD!!


rutger612rutger612

Rated 0 / 5 stars

this is crap


strikendicestrikendice

Rated 3 / 5 stars

the game is a start isnt that bad isnt that great so its a average try of it


mediumebmediumeb

Rated 0 / 5 stars

Waste of Time. No Actions or trials. This is a test area not even a test game. Could of gotten feed back just posting screen shots.


coding123coding123

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I think that it is a good start...you need to work on your animation for walking up and down, and make the environment a little more interesting, ex: wind, butterflies


Odball2Odball2

Rated 3 / 5 stars

good try, practice more and you will do cool games


JojoTheOverLordJojoTheOverLord

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

come on now cut 'em some slack i think it has plenty of potential it has good controls and i think it could be a fun game if it is worked on more and finished keep up the good work!


killer123terkiller123ter

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

a good start make more and practice


ShadowGardenShadowGarden

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

It's good. Great potential and I think with practice and effort, the 5R's will come a'flowing... :D


TheSpaceCoreTheSpaceCore

Rated 3 / 5 stars

I won't rate it down. its your first game. but, i use "game" loosely. is there any goal to accomplish? what does the hole do? does the chest in the house do anything? there seems to be no point. and, since there are no instructions, i'm left clueless.


dragonflamesmediadragonflamesmedia

Rated 3 / 5 stars

well to be perfectly honest, there are a few good points and bad points.
Good points: no stuck areas, likable character, decent graphics,
Bad points: everything in the house is so big that the character should have grown too, no limit to movable area in cave, buildings are able to be walked all over (no limits) and not enough interaction with objects to be a good test.


whymeomgwhymeomg

Rated 3 / 5 stars

nice graphics...but....whats the point of the 'game'? i just walk around doing nothing...


x1204x1204

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

i can't really review this as a game. Some things to point out (not sure if already said. Too lazy to read.) The blue house can be walked on top of. Every time you enter the firs screen it brings you to the same default start point (which makes no sense if you're coming in from the screen to the right.) No instructions. No interaction with objects. And it's not an rpg without a story or enemies, or some sort of point.


KidSandriffKidSandriff

Rated 1 / 5 stars

I won! And you will too! As soon as you play! Look, you can't just upload this like this, you have to know that there is nothing that the character does at all, there is no game here and it if it was a test of seeing if the character could move around you could've easily tested that yourself. There is nothing here that requires a review from anyone. But lucky for you the guy below me if he's still there, wrote the words, "awesome for a test" and I it made me feel like I was being to harsh so I gave you a star. Though next time if you're going to load something up, make sure it something you ACTUALLY need criticism or help with as far as a TEST is concerned.
Tips: Fix where the character appears when entering and exiting settings.
Dialogue boxes about anything would enhance it.
Create a beginning and an end even in a test.
A name of a character goes a long way.
Why the blue house? Check passable/unpassable zones
Add an action button even if its just to hit leaves.
Sorry if I was mean. My subtitle guy quit today and my film is backed up another month...


StefanielouiseStefanielouise

Rated 0 / 5 stars

What was the point of this "game".Game being used very tongue in cheek. Suppose it can only get better.


finnick123finnick123

Rated 2 / 5 stars

one of the worst games i played in my life it makes poop look like candy


jasonkennethjasonkenneth

Rated 5 / 5 stars

so cute

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