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It's been said already, but English subtitles would really add some spice to the series. As it is, I'm left a bit confused at the end. The images don't really speak for themselves, even though there's some great FBF animation mixed in. It took a while for the animation to really start though. Might have been different if I understood the text, but as it is it feels like there's a lot of walking and not that much getting anywhere... keep it going though!
I try to improve and be more international on next project. To be honest i haven't made alot finished flash animations others were some unfinished stickfigure projects. I appreciate critique so i can hear what to improve on. Thanks.
Not bad, I agree with Onronc about your animation skill, that may need some work but it's already decent.
The main issue here is the language, you should really use english subtitles (even if it's a bad english) 'cause it's more or less impossible for over 90% of the NG-users to understand your language. I thought it was Finnish till I read Martti010's comment and find out it is Estonian!
I hope you submit more of your comics, but please try to translate it first so you can reach your audience.
Thx for feedback. I finish third animation and if i make something in future i make it in english.
I am Estonian myself, and this was a waste of time, I didn't like it. There's nothing special about the text too. Well maybe the animations are good but I found the video to be pointless.
thx for honest opinion. AitÃ¤h.
I'm not sure what to think of this since I speak English and it's hard to follow, but I can review the animation. Some of it looked good, and some of it was hilariously bad (the guy hitting the wall just made me laugh) but he walking away at the end looks good. I think you should keep working on this stuff.
i know what you mean by hard to follow. I haven't introduced story or characters in any way. And it starts after the comics story which i haven't presented also. I try to improve animation and make something more fitting for broad audience after i finish third animation. Thx for commenting.
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First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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