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Unfortunate Girl:TWO pt.1

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Mar 20, 2013 | 7:36 PM EDT
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After the death of her parents, Karissa tries to move on, though her past still haunts her.
The origins of the Karissa/Shawn duo are shown, while something sinister seems to be watching Karissa's day to day life.

If the cartoon runs a little choppy on your computer, either buy a better computer or watch it on my Youtube channel linked in the loader screen!
Hey, guys! So this actually just the FIRST part of this full episode. I reached Flash's 16,000 frame limit JUST at the end of the full episode, which was about 15 minutes long, so I had to cut it in half. So the pacing might seem a little rushed because of that, and for that I am sorry! I will upload part 2 as soon as I'm done giving it a final polish!




Rated 5 / 5 stars

This was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! I have two questions though. Why are karissa's eyes pure white where the rest of her family have normal eyes? And do we find out what happened to the little sister? I noticed she wasn't a part of the memory from the windmill.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Karissa: Have you been stalking me?
Shaun: Maybe...

This short film is so amazing it should be on Disney Junior! XD

Feedback: Great animation, music and sound it gave me the chills I am looking forward to the next part I need to know more of the story line...


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great job, I was witing for it a lot.
Really amazing how Max and Mega64 supported you.
Facinating animation and writing.
But the only thing I didnt like, its Shon's voice.
Its pretty lound and annoying for a horror toon. a deeper whispery voice could get along with the toon.

TheFabs responds:

Well, Shawn is supposed to be a ray of light in this dark story. He is an upbeat guy and helps Karissa through her sadness and makes her into something bigger and better, mentally. He's gotta sound like it!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Creeeeeepyyyyyy...thank you so much for not putting in any jump scares! The way every horror animator seems to love making people jump sucks. Your use of suspense and developing images captures a truly sinister piece! Can't wait to see the rest of this, and what the heck is going on.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Why not make a preface?