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After spending millennia in hiding, the Albatross of the Apocalypse puts his grand doomsday plan into motion, but will everything go according to plan?
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Now that was something.
Talk about original.
Best Albatross since the dead one in monty python
The plot was interesting, but a little odd for my taste. You had some jokes, but they didn't really flow and it seemed you were mostly relying on the oddity of the scenario to entertain your audience. The animation was good, but the sound quality was a bit off. Nothing much, but it was a little bit fuzzy.
Also, and this is just nit picking, but 6-7 nukes going off over the pacific ocean would have little effect on the main land.
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Thanks for the feedback! The idea behind the nukes taking out the whole planet is that the few that hit the UFO were supposed to trigger an international response from other countries not knowing what was going on, and firing their own all over the place. I guess I could have shown that play out better though...
That's what happens when someone lets a nuke off by accident, or purpose, or both. The whole concept is incredibly random, the albatross of destruction, living in a sub, the captain getting beamed up, and then everything is blown away. Completely random, but still a plot to follow. The mixture of regular animation and effects works well, the great explosions, the burning fire, how the city sinks down at the end to revewal a spacey continuation. Animation isn't the smoothest, but the transitions and effects are on another level. Nice work!
Thanks! Glad you liked it! My idea for episode 2 is equally random, but hopefully just as entertaining.
Could use a few tweeks here and there (I'm sure you know them) but it was awesome!
Though I did expect a bit of a joke in there somewheres guess itl come episode 2.
Bring a buddy.
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