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Mar 16, 2013 | 1:24 PM EDT

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Hi there.

This is my very first flash attempt. Advices welcome. This is where it all begins ^^

Reviews


FleshbagFleshbag

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Superb storytellling :D
Seriously, it's a good start.


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polikypoliky

Rated 5 / 5 stars

8/10
5/5
it was pretty good for a first timers animation and it had the expreienced event of the play button added in through yourself and not through newgrounds so thats good, it shows you know how to work with events well enough. artwork is reminiscent of the artwork of fulps. i couldnt really say anything about the animation but from waht i could it seemed to be decent but try adding another frame in so the head and wahtever else your using travels smoother, of course this requires more work but with a very good outcome.

Good luck,
From an old man named, poliky


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gOrc responds:

thank you, I'll keep that in mind.


belthagorbelthagor

Rated 3 / 5 stars

it was short but good, you should have different variations of him snoring