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Mar 16, 2013 | 7:14 AM EDT

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I am making animations for a newsletter at my workspace.

this is the first of those animations, I would like to have some feed back on how to improve the animation.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

the art was original and it had ok sound effects but it should be longer and have a llitle more comedy

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

its an okay animation...but rating it teen is a bit too sensitive.You should rate it teen if there is blood in it, not if there is just a bit of mean comedy in it.

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