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Triangle Tirade

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rated 3.30 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Comedy - Original
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funny
humor
rant
humpty

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Uploaded
Mar 14, 2013 | 10:49 AM EDT

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When William "Humpty" Dumpty meets with old friends Dish and Spoon, a nice dinner turns into an opportunity of a lifetime.

Reviews


VinnitoElitoVinnitoElito

Rated 4 / 5 stars

This is pretty funny, and true. Though I must admit, there was a lot of extra talking that took away from the jokes. Not that that's a bad thing. It can be a good thing. Especially since in this flash more is needed to keep people interested than a few well laid puns.


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Michael-T-Scott responds:

No offense taken. As you pointed out, my material is pretty much dialogue and situation driven more than gag-laden. So basically if all the "talking" doesn't work, I'm screwed.


VicariousEVicariousE

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

It happens to everyone eventually. These are the warning signs!



WorkerStudioWorkerStudio

Rated 5 / 5 stars

You are the real deal William. You are the real deal.