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Mar 9, 2013 | 8:45 AM EST

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Cartoon was made in 5 days.
For an animation festival in our town.
I hope you enjoy.
Voice of all me.
If you like, subscribe on my channel :)
http://www.youtube.com/as tekolnikov

Reviews


HaggardHaggard

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 19, 2013

A flash about two monkeys teasing each other. Doesn't sound too interesting at first, but I think this turned out pretty well. I especially liked the sound effects. The "mario jumping sound" was a nice touch and the voices of the monkeys are pretty cool.

I also liked the background sound effects. Even though this is just a minor detaiI, I think details like this seperate "poorly made" flashes from "well done" flashes.

However, the pacing of the flash isn't that good. I felt that the teasing was going on for too long. Also, the animations need some work as well. As far as I can tell, most of it was done with simple tweens, which doesn't look too good.

Overall: The flash is enjoyable to watch, but it needs some more work for the animations and on the pacing of the story. I think, if you can spend more than 5 days on a flash, you can come up with some pretty cool stuff: Flashes, that aren't just "enjoyable" but "awesome". :)

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ArcadeHero responds:

Thanks so much! I see! :)


DeckyDecky

Rated 4 / 5 stars March 12, 2013

Not a bad, funny short though there are a couple of problems that I can see of, for example the bigger monkey's blinks sound more like a coconut hitting the ground then the coconut that whacks him on the head. Also the movement of the smaller monkey seems to simple, I would have liked to see you spend more time animating his arms and legs instead of having him bounce across the floor, the mario sound effect for this also seemed cringe worthy and over used.

I liked the writing of this flash, I think as far as comedy shorts go it did it's job vthough more work needed doing, I personally would have taken this as a kind of advance animatic and spent another week or so improving it in any way I could. I strongly suggest you do that for your next one and we may be talking about some seriously good flashes.

It says in the description "Voices of all me" do you mean you did the monkey voices? if so that is very impressive.

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ArcadeHero responds:

Yep, I did the monkey voices :)
Thanks for review.
I know that the work isn't good enough.
Short period of time is a little limited me.
+ I'm a bit lazy :D In the new flash I'll try to accommodate all of the previous shortcomings