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Mar 9, 2013 | 3:42 AM EST

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***I've added a preloader so if you watched it before and thought it was too laggy can you tell me if this has fixed it??**
Yeah the storys not very original I know... I was a bit short on time since it was a birthday present for my friend.
I've never uploaded an animation to this site but I decided to so please give constructive critiscm and I hope you enjoy!

Reviews


NCot09NCot09

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 28, 2014

My only advice would be is if you plan on using text use text boxes at the top of bottom. Don't over lap the characters with the text. Good job overall though



ProxistoProxisto

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 14, 2013

Everyone Ignored Luigi Till Now D:



Pkmn2Pkmn2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 10, 2013

This has potential. If you do this more frequently, then you'll be great. What I didn't like was the ending. It was very spontaneous and felt rushed. But since you made this for a friend of yours, then I guess it's just okay.

It was very entertaining. I hope, you will post more here.


SuperBowserBros responds:

Yeah I had to get it done in time for his birthday and I really do agree it's the weakest point of the animation. Thanks for the comment!


Mderbe1Mderbe1

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 9, 2013

I'm a huge Mario fan, and this was pretty decent. The only thing is that the ending seemed a little abrupt and as if Luigi didn't even plan for bob-omb to show up.


SuperBowserBros responds:

Thankyou! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah I agree with that, the ending was a poor. Thanks for the advice!


freakworld10freakworld10

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 9, 2013

So yeah, it was indeed pretty laggy. You could download a preloader from newgrounds, but theyve removed that option since the redesign i think...

So yeah, the story was a bit low, but so you could focus on the action.

But yeah, there weren't really many other sprites fighting other than luigi and bowser, and their moveset wasn't as full of attacks as in other sprites movies (SMBZ or TTA etc.).

But (I guess) this is an awesome birthday present, so keep on working!


SuperBowserBros responds:

Thanks for the advice! I've added a preloader so hopefully it's a little less laggy now!