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Mar 8, 2013 | 3:58 PM EST

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My FIRST Point-and-click game. Alright, guys you can leave as much negative and positive reviews as you want. But I am working on bigger and better things for the portal. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(REMAKING THE GAME BECAUSE IT IS CLEARLY STUPID!) NEW UPDATES, Will be done by MAY 12th!!!!!

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DjpriceDjprice

Rated 1 / 5 stars March 10, 2013

Well at least it wasn't long...... Had a little humor

1. get someone to do the art
2. make a longer script but first get #1 done
3. Add some music or sounds. I know it's harder to do it with flash.
4. Just get some help

From a true brony
Good luck on the next submission!



DigitalHunterDigitalHunter

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 10, 2013

Wait, wait, wait. Are you sure this is a game? I mean, first of all, I had NO IDEA what the game was about! Come on man. It seemed like there was no storyline at all! And if there was, I did NOT understand it! And it's just boring gameplay. Click here, click there. Don't look at me like that. I absolutely love point 'n click games. But since I didn't understand what the heck this game is all about (except for the title), it was too plain, too boring. And there's no music! At all! Games SHOULD have music, crappy or not. That just adds to how boring it is to play this game. No music equals no fun. And then there's the grand finale. THE GRAPHICS. Man, you gotta fix this. The graphics was just all over the place which also adds to how boring the game is. And is also the reason we have no idea what we're playing. I didn't go here to send the hate, I went here to play a game that I expected would be pretty good. So don't take this as offensive. I'm just trying to give you some advice. I suggest you try to collaborate with an artist and a musician to help you out, and learn some programming if you could (or, if you do know how to program, try polishing up your skills). I'm sorry, man. There was just nothing good about this game. I have to give you no stars. :/ You might say, "But this is my first game.". But I just can't see the effort put in. Maybe make a simpler game for your first game. :)



slicespeed91slicespeed91

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars March 9, 2013

DUDE i will do art 4 u next time if u want



Skyballin420Skyballin420

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 9, 2013

I'm just gonna be strait forward, this game is not good. but i encourage you to keep at it.


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RIIRRIIR

Rated 0 / 5 stars March 9, 2013

Handwritten text is a big fat NO
I pressed what I assume was the play button (hard to tell)
Then I completed the game in 12 clicks. More options, more challenges, more colours, generally more.
Not that I want more of a game with no story or interest. One joke about the stupidity of teachers and and angryface hardly serve as entertainment.
Have actual typed text, make sure said text fills the space it is displayed in, do not write in all caps, increase the size of clickable areas(clicking the black bits of a locker is hardly intuative), add some animation or something (still black and white frames provide no interest)
Also add some poor quality music on loop so that I don't have to supply my own music and sound effects. Then when you have done that, add a mute button so that I don't have to put up with whatever sound effects you choose.

I'm harsh, but this is all for your own good. So deal with it and make the changes or just start again from the top.