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This video is a paperclip saving stuff. I forgot to add something sports related, though, but who cares. I'll make it the punching. Chrome will also appear in another mrcontesty short by the way, so stay tuned!
I guess everyone have to start somewhere.
The concept is fine, a clip jumping around and pushing people over, but everything else is lacking.
The music is alright.
That was very pointless, and didn't make any sense what so ever.
Poorly done. Paper clips are generally fairly easy to draw but the way you drew paper clip looked very sloppily done. There were problems with the line quality, and you should always redo a line if you don't think it looks that good.
The whole scribble thing you tried to do in the beginning looked pretty ugly. Scribbling a darker shade of green onto a lighter shade of green is not artistic, and it doesn't even look good, especially with the way the colors contrast.
The guy he knocked over was pretty horribly drawn, complete with zoom-ins on the gritty line quality and generic character design. Pretty badly done, and a paperclip can knock over a human being? I know it's a cartoon, but even cartoons have boundaries between what's cartoony and what's just plain ridiculous.
How does the paper clip knocking over the human who we didn't see did anything wrong make the paper clip a hero? Being proud of your religion is fine but adding "but Jesus is the real hero" in there out of context looks out of place, if you want to add something like that, don't do it when there's anything going on, if anything put it in the beginning or at the end.
How does the paperclip walking past that guy make him a hero? I don't get it. Chrome punching the paper clip for no reason wasn't obvious because the arm was black and the background was dark so we couldn't see the arm and it took a second to register in my mind that Chrome was actually punching the paper clip.
Random punching does not make it funny. You may find it funny, but anybody over the age of five will not be amused, most likely.
Everything that isn't a Squishable episode that you've made is very hard to understand without you having to explain to the viewer what it means. Bagel Virus was the worst case of this, nobody could tell what happened.
Sorry, I'll put the Jesus message at the end next time, but this is a mrcontesty cartoon, not a nat29 cartoon, so I don't think i have to be extremely serious for the mrcontesty cartoons most of the time, but thanks for the review!
This is quite possibly the most trippy and terrifying thing I have ever seen, just add some unsettleing music and it will be sure to keep everyone up at night.
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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