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This is a re-upload! Episode 2 coming soon!
The animation makes me sad :(
Nice blunt though
This goes on for far to long for something as incoherent and rambly as this, i guess skit.
Art is jumpy and even glitched (how do you even glitch an animation?)
This goes nowhere and has no pay off. I suppose you tried, so i can at least give you a pat on the back for effort.
Things that might wanna be fixed in future flashes.
Better Animation and art in general
Better sound quality, as the voices are hard to make out.
A more focused narrative, that's less rambling with its jokes.
And maybe a story to draw your audience into the strange floral world you are portraying.
Now i am not expecting You to get amazing at this, but this defiantly needs improvement if you want to acquire a regular audience.
Thanks for the tips! My brothers are animators, not me. My animations literally take me 5 mins. Its not made to be taken seriously though lol. Just something I do to pass time! (:
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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