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note : if you hate stick figures then dont watch . thank you for understanding .
rhg 3 against kanga - b .
sorry my fla. was ruined and i cant continue this anymore . really sorry . just enjoy instead
This may not be the most original thing I have seen on this site, but judging from what you did finish; it's not bad.
Animation: To be honest, there are so many stick figure cartoons on NG that it takes an extreme amount of effort to make something worthy of the five vote. However, this is far from a piece of shit. You did a good job on animating your segment for that match, and I liked the fbf electricity effects you did on the preloader screen. (What can I say? I like hand-drawn/tweening-based effects.) As for constructive suggestions, I would say that you ought to study basic drawing techniques as a means to enhance your animating abilities.
Sound: It was nice of Pepper to provide sound effects for your little battle, and Evil Dog's music was cool though it wasn't the most befitting. For future projects, I will recommend that you scour the audio portal for music. (Try Hopeku, xenith800, AndY J, Papkee, Waterflame, and Mich for a musical treasure trove.)
Content: As previously mentioned, this isn't original at all, but I do see that you have basic direction knowledge and would like for you to keep working on them. Your choreography was well done, staging well thought out, and the pacing was appropriate. However, I will ask of you to check out other types of movies, books, and cartoons as a means to broaden your influences.
-Great sound effects
-What you did with the preloader was cool
-Could have used more appropriate music.
Overall: An eight is fitting for something like this. (4/5)
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