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**Apologies for lack of Loading screen - I will update the file to include one at a later date.
In honour of the 200th anniversary of Brother Grimm fairy tales, a small team including myself created this rather short adaptation on their lesser known fairy tale; The Bremmen travelling musicians.
I really like the brother grimms stories and I'm sad you did not go through with the whole story but stopped in the middle and changed the ending.
But I did liked your art and the animations a lot and would like to see more stories :)).
This definitely needs a few tweaks. The voice overs overlap each other, and when you scroll to find a place for them to sleep, it is incredibly slow.
I suggest re-submitting this after working out a few bugs. :)
It's a great concept, but poor delivery. The art and voicing could use a bit of work. As a starting point, this isn't too bad. As for the narrator, the voice is muddled. Maybe you could have some subtitles to better understand what is being said.
This is a great starting point, but not finished material. Keep trying, though. I'm interested in what you come up with!
It wasn't bad. It was fairly well made, I just think that you need to implement a way of stopping the dialogue so that it doesn't clump all together like it did.
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