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I was inspired by a picture found on the interwebs so i made a short animation from it. Kinda depressing i know :) (made it in about 6 hours so don't await miracles...) Enjoy :P
That was pretty good, and depressing. Make more please.
I like this. A lot. I watch a lot animation on new grounds, and not many make statements like this one. I understand you made it in a short amount of time, but I wouldn't be doing my self-appointed job if I didn't offer some constructive criticism: As much as I liked it, the swinging noose bit went on a little long. After 2 or 3 passes, we get the message. It's an awesome concept, but so much time dedicated to it kinda lowers the impact of the message. The soundscape was also a little barren. I get that you're sending a certain message with this, but if you're gonna have the noose-bit go as long as you do, spicing up the things we hear wouldn't hurt. I don't mean throw John Williams in there, but something subtle would bring a lot to the feel. The animation was a little choppy, so making it a little smoother would also improve things.
Overall though, for having been made so quickly, I still really like it. The animation quality is good, and the contrast between the two views is strong and funny in some cases. Good work!
Very original and I personally enjoyed it, because I know the feeling of being suicidal all too well. Well done.
i liked the concept but the animation wasn't very good
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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