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Jan 31, 2013 | 10:14 PM EST
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Author Comments

OMFG DONT YOU JUST HATE WHEN UGGHHH okay yeah oh well

ahem HEY, so just a quick short (and I do mean short) to try out some of our new character designs/style ideas that I've been working on. I adapted this from a 1-page comic that I made awhile back, which I got the idea for while peeing on a tree on the side of the highway... if you know what I'm Saiyan #YOLO
It seems like it worked out okay so yeah we'll be getting back to some story-based stuff soon, the next thing we make will probably be longer and probably not involve bodily waste. Don't test me though.

KBAI

Reviews


NocturnalSlugNocturnalSlug

Rated 4 / 5 stars

It's good, is this a teaser for a series? I hope so, I like the vague but cool character development, I hope there'll be more of that, and not just jokes on their own.

PROS
-The character designs, absolutely crisp and effective
-The general joke, if it was just the drip thing on it's own it would be a bit weak, but the second half saved it, the guy's enthusiasm for his flash is quite funny.
-Animation
-The characters in general, it wasn't much time but you managed to get some personalities across, which is good, the female in particular is good.
-Voice acting

CONS
-Bad audio quality, when he shouts "FUCK" it's ear piercing, as well as the "YES" bit, be careful with that, it can ruin something quite easily, the other voice audio is fine though.
-Voice acting like I said was good, but too many "um"s and "uh yeah"s, that stuff is fine, but it's overdone, make sure you trim your dialogue a bit more, no padding.

Overall I see this as a teaser, could work as a series, if you do make sure you really get into the characters and fill it with as much goodness as possible, such as themes, subtle emotions (for example, even though the girl was insulting the guy, you could sense a bit of friendship there), continuation and more character development. And hopefully no memes, but that's a personal vendetta.



JosheeStarJosheeStar

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Oh god this is sooooo trueeeeeee X3



tanukibombertanukibomber

Rated 5 / 5 stars

When i first saw this i thought he was masturbating....



InfintyDragonInfintyDragon

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

This is obviously only a thing men can relate to. Women have to wipe after all, and I've never seen a roll of toilet paper next to a urinal.


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LivelongWheelLivelongWheel

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i hate you... because now every time i go to the bathroom i start laughing while looking at my dick and the person next to me looks at me funny now...