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This is my awesomest ever first flash Cartoon! It is complete with explosions and bears riding on motorcyles while on FIREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Not bad for your first go. Sound quality was surprisingly clear on the voice. Animation needs some work, but you're new and you got time to improve, so no worries. Some advice on writing, though: Unless you're doing a balls-to-the-walls parody, I wouldn't use names of already existing characters. I know this is just your first short and all, but "Tom Tucker" for a reporter isn't the way to go. My suggestion is to try making up fun names for your characters, even if they have no consequence. Like..."Wendy Duckington". Or "Dave Chestnuttershire". Just my take, though.
The "fawing" sound was convincing, I'll give you that.
Fantastic animation and very professional vocal work.
I hope to see more from you in the future.
A short film about a park bench
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