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Kirby finds himself dreaming in DreamLand... but it's all just a dream. Or is it? I think its semi-safe to say that this is my first REAL animation. I experimented with many things during the making of this.
You poorly traced some Kirby sprites and then got too lazy to do the rest. That made the art style conflict horribly. It was also just a mess of images being thrown around, literally. There was no point in watching this at all. It got even more dull towards the end as it became clear you didn't have a big choice of iamges to use, so I saw the same ones over and over. It was synced up to the music which is about the only good thing I can find. The music though, what you did to it just made it sound pretty horrible. This was unenjoyable in every way.
i think i saw something like this in youtube before. is this based off that? although i think the other one was about an acid trip.
Not sure, I can't recall any that iv seen
Oh man... Kirby got sick.. o_o
^^ I suppose he did. OR maybe that's how he thinks/dreams after getting the Invincibility Lollipop. :P
i did enjoy it however i couldnt help but feel like it was missing something like perhaps an aperence from king dedede just one small touch can make a huge difference
Yeah I see what you mean. thanks :P
Okay, this was really neat! It felt like a music video more than anything, given that there wasn't much story other than Kirby has a dream. I really liked the zooming in on the pixelated objects, I don't see that done much in flashes. I also like that you attempted to draw and animate Kirby as well, rather than using his sprite only.
The only complaint I have is that the backgrounds seemed kind of bland for a "dream" of sorts. One would expect more colorfull, random backgrounds in a dream of Dreamland. Maybe giant lolipop trees and apple watter wheels or just a general light and fluffy candy filled dreamscape.
I really liked what you did here, with the music and the animation, I just feel like it could have been more vivid. 3.5 stars for you, sir.
Thanks a lot :P
I do agree I could have added more to the backgrounds and made it more dreamy.
thanks for the review!
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