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Epiosde 1 of Space House is here! The bold crew of a house adrift in space must face perilous foes, alien encounters and the challenges of day-to-day life when your house is inexplicably sailing through the stars.
With Music by Mr Weebl!
While the concept is good and the plot is consistent with what is to be expected of a video about a house adrift in space. I do feel that it lacks a certain amount of information about their predicament, especially for the first episode. For example: What is the Mega Beast?, Why was the one guy bitten and how was he bitten? Was there a fight or did the Mega Beast just walk through the front door, bite the guy and leave. Also I would have expected the first episode to be the beginning and explain why there is a house floating in space, instead of starting in the middle where stuff has already happened and we are left to figure out how and why. Other than that the animation is smooth and the story has the potential to be great, if the plot holes are filled in, which they probably will be. I can't wait to see more of this as it looks to be another humorous series with a decent plot and a necessary amount of voilence thrown in just for good measure.
Thanks for the feedback! I'm going to go into more detail about the house in later episodes. They'll be longer, and more thought out than this one for sure. I believe I leaned too heavily on the ridiculousness of the situation rather than forming good jokes or building character identity, which I'll try to balance out for later installments. All the best!
Animation was good, found the jokes didn't have enough punch to them, seemed hollow.
Other then that everything else was good, i enjoyed the starting narration so definatly keep that in there! cant wait to see the next ep.
I thought Jamie's Newgrounds was dead good animation nonetheless
Under judgement + featured content? The fuck...
I'm honestly as confused as you are. Seriously. I have no idea what's going on.
And they all died. The end.
A story about a dog!
this art teacher is WHACK!!!!
Meeting new people on the first day can be a real gamble.
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