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Jan 23, 2013 | 8:14 PM EST

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testing out flash, first super rough game! please ignore
p.s. there is sound

EDIT: I am a new user of newgrounds and did not realize how active the userbase is! Excuse my putting up a test game, I was using newgrounds as a temporary dumping ground for my first flash game (it is indeed a test game, I made in two days). I now see it is not an appropraite place for that!

Nontheless, thanks for the feedback and ratings. I appreciate the honest critisism. I'm used to getting unhelpful compliments from my experiences with art sites.

I'm interested in making actual decent games once I learn how to properly use flash... I'd like to keep the feedback so I will see if this stays up and try to keep it.

anyways thanks, I'll bring some better games next time! : )

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helgipunkhelgipunk

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Looks good. Looking forward to see the finished version.


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terciopelonegroterciopelonegro

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Loved the artsy stile, but you should make a coment on the description about that it takes a little to charge in a slow connection pc, cause the screen stais white and seems like it does work...
Anyway....GREAT JOB


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phermpherm

Rated 1 / 5 stars

i Get a good feeling about this game so i am looking forward to play the complete game.


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VanDiestVanDiest

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

felt very creeped out while playing, good job!


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DeeJayyDementiaDeeJayyDementia

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

There should definitely be more to it than just that. Some sort of ending other than "Now everything is black." I get that it's supposed to be dark, creepy, and mysterious, but it just doesn't quite work in such a short game. Maybe if you extended it and gave us some more clues as to what happened at the end it would be a lot better. Like, if the guy was going insane and did it, or if there was some sort of monster, etc. Good concept, just not quite there yet.


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winterfingers responds:

Good point, and thanks for the feedback. I will indeed come back will some real games, thanks for the critique!