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I had fun making this....and thats all that matters
**See how many references you can find!**
Well, based on the japanese anime-style flash and the surroundings, correct me if i'm wrong, you're probably an otaku, yes? Nice drawing and mild jokes, I'd rate for 4/5 and 7/10 for that. And I love that Panty and Stocking transformation part!
This could be amazing but it jumps around like a preview of something bigger. Great work
I would really like to see this refined. Right now, I think there's a bit too much borrowed material and sequence, but this level of execution demonstrates an opportunity to go further.
Or you could go the other way, ensuring beyond the shadow of a doubt that every single scene is borrowed from something great. There's value in a series where Haruko works for the GXP and uses angelic transformation to control the black blood of madness.
You're good at this classic anime writing/ animating. I like this series because it takes the best parts of anime -like the quirky jokes that make me laugh and the cool fight scene ending- but leaves the bad anime themes which they are nutoriously known for like the monologue "flashback" episodes which drag out and try to squeeze some pointless emotion from you, instead it had this consistent cool fun vibe. The way you outline the characters with a thicker line gives them quite a unique comic book style (Ive been wondering how you do that). Both VAs took extremely well to their characters so good job VAs.
Also considering it's just you working on this the backgrounds look great.
Great music tracks throughout. Every time it changed track it was kind of... refreshing? Nice.
I also liked the design for the engineer. It was pretty cool how neither of them spoke, they just got down to buisness.
Two small things that might help you for the next episode-
The piece of art at the end is super nice, but it doesnt do it justice to have it stretched out of proportion. If it where me, I would have just put boarders down the sides and have the credits run through the middle or something. I dont know, it's just a little thing.
Also, your smoke/explosion effects start off really well and are well structured and convincing, but in my experience the dust particles take a long time to settle, maybe try to lengthen the end part of the explosion out with either inbetween frames, shape tween(careful it doesnt glitch) or motion tween. Some camera shake could increase the impact further.
Put this on youtube I can see it getting very popular, no joke!
I wrote this long ass review because I really like the show and look up to you as a fellow animator and wanted to show my appreciation =D
Thanks alot for those good suggestions
ahh hmm it was alright in terms of animation but the story was a bit to follow. I noticed the panty hose and stocking with Garterbelt theme at the end but something felt missen from this but I do believe and can see that this will definitely be great as it progresses. So far you have a unique animesque style down all you need is a quirky story that works well but you have a head start so keep at it.
Bring a buddy.
Yugi and Kaiba have a duel to the death!
A sinister deal is underway in the underbelly of Neon City
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