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This is one of my first animations and my first upload on NG, you can check more cartoons in my Youtube channel (TheTziip),
I hope you enjoy and that's all!. (Sorry for the loop, my new in on this)
It was actually pretty nice. The quality is a bit low, but that is not a problem. The music was quite fitting, but not the best.
Lacks a start / replay menu.
I enjoyed most of the art aspects and the movie was entertaining, some parts pertiularly the ending were really well done. so kudos on that!
This your first NG upload so perhaps you don't know about these things but i HIGHLY reccomend adding a preloader and a play button. A replay button at the end would be nice too instead of an automatic loop. You can download a snazzy NG one from here: http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/ (the download includes instructions).
As for the actual flash i thought it was pretty fun! Nice pacing and atmosphere. The jazz (or is it blues? I'm ignorant of these things) music was a classy touch and in fact, the general sound quality was pretty nice.
The animation could have done with some more fbf in my opinion as it was all a little static and rigid. Definite potential and a good concept, looking forward to more of your work!
Thanks , I really appreciate your comments, from now i'll put a play button and is jazz.
I liked it. My only issue with it was, I couldnt tell what was being thrown out the window. Was it the machine or the repairman? Either way, the expression on the bears face when it was plugged in was priceless, I loved the, "oh shit, oops" look on his face. The other thing I could really do without is the looping, but thats just a subjective issue of mine. The animation itself was pretty nice and the build up to the end was really decent. Ill keep an eye out for more stuff from you to see how you are progressing, but this was a good start, as you mentioned it was one of your first.
The repairman was thrown out the window, and yeah the looping was a mistake :S
Quite dull, this movie
I cracked not a single smile
The music was nice
Ok, thanks for your opinion.
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