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Sorry, man...not much effort or at least craftmanship IMO...I'd spend more time on your work, add music and sfx, make it longer, etc...
I think your comment says it all. Badly drawn, animation screwy at best. I like how the guy doing the punching metamorphs into someone else at the very end, and how he looks stoned. And how he appears to have a shovel as part of his arm.
No sound, no music, very short and extremely pointless. Yeah.
Sorry, but not sufficent to be stored on Newgrounds for all eternity.
You need cleaner graphic, nicer animation, sound, plot and well everything.
I get that you want to practice with something easy, but this is a site for admirration, not storage, after all.
Not NG material. It's good to see that you've started animating but this is, at best, an unfinished experiment. I don't like the term "doodle" but that seems to be what this is. Please keep trying and work towards a more complete project.
Why am I watching this? Sorry, but I don't see any ways to improve it, except deleting.
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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