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Jan 21, 2013 | 11:03 AM EST

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StereoTypoStereoTypo

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 21, 2013

Not NG material. It's good to see that you've started animating but this is, at best, an unfinished experiment. I don't like the term "doodle" but that seems to be what this is. Please keep trying and work towards a more complete project.


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CaelbainCaelbain

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 21, 2013

Sorry, but not sufficent to be stored on Newgrounds for all eternity.

You need cleaner graphic, nicer animation, sound, plot and well everything.

I get that you want to practice with something easy, but this is a site for admirration, not storage, after all.


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magusvulgarismagusvulgaris

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 21, 2013

Why am I watching this? Sorry, but I don't see any ways to improve it, except deleting.


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JCoolAudioJCoolAudio

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars January 21, 2013

Sorry, man...not much effort or at least craftmanship IMO...I'd spend more time on your work, add music and sfx, make it longer, etc...



revelationwarerevelationware

Rated 0 / 5 stars January 21, 2013

that's it? That's all you got?