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"A Little Less Conversation" By Elvis Presley
"Swingers Side Show Dance Club has an interesting staff.
Curiosity can kill."
Up this week by the skin of my teeth. And longer than a minute this time. Part of why it took so long... I refused to cut anything this time.
I love this world you have created in "Swingers." Every installment in enjoyable to watch and I'm always looking forward to the next one. Some suggestions: 1) On the audio, which I know you have been trying to work on, there is still an abruptness to the way the sound plays, especially the music. I would suggest slowly introducing the song with a fade-in, while the previous action is wrapping up. That way, you can create a little more continuity from event to event. 2) On the story, the overall plot was entertaining, but the resolution was too quick. You needed to either over-express Ragtime's assertiveness over the genie or draw out the ending just a little more to provide explanation for how she was able to pull it off so easily.
But this is rapidly becoming one of my favorite series, so keep it up!
and just like that, i'm addicted to this series.
I really liked the visuals. But... the rest was a bit.... I really hate to say this... boring.
4 stars for the visuals and length of the animation, no less.
not bad, keep it up
The animation looks like something I did back in highschool in the animation class but still it was long and you did well with it.
I love the part when she was trying to figure out how to use the necklace because in reality that is what people normally do when trying to do that kind of stuff lol.
Put down your hog dog burrito, it time to learn the Chinese.
Hoenn Intro Animated
The second episode of Nites
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