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"A Little Less Conversation" By Elvis Presley
"Swingers Side Show Dance Club has an interesting staff.
Curiosity can kill."
Up this week by the skin of my teeth. And longer than a minute this time. Part of why it took so long... I refused to cut anything this time.
in the end all you need to solve an issue is small vampire with a attitude and a swift uppercut(refrence to epi.1 just so you know).
I can somewhat sense what you're going for, and you've pulled off the aesthetic better than you have in the previous episodes, so there is definitely improvement here. You seem to have nailed down the feeling of what you want to happen, but I think you can still execute the lines and cues better.
The characters don't seem to be dynamically present at times, they often feel layered onto the same scene. One thing that contributes to this is that the characters tend to have attitudes/reactions that are exaggerated too far from generally relatable attitudes/reactions. For example, Ragtime always seems to have a sour attitude, but I can't gather 'why' she does from the information given in these movies. I find myself asking, "What is her daily life like to make her feel the way she does?," "how was her childhood?," etc.
I guess what I'm trying to say is that the characters strike me as one-dimensional. In my opinion, more character/story depth is needed to take this series to its full potential. I do enjoy the series as it is, and a couple parts in this episode were executed well enough to be humorous, but that's all the reason for me to want to see this series become all that it can be.
Great work and effort! Good luck and keep improving!
I don't show my cards in the first hand.
and just like that, i'm addicted to this series.
How had i not seen this before. Does sound like you had a studio mic put in right around episode 4, everything startedto get alot more clear. The animation has steadily gotten better and better as well. this is actually hilarious, you should pitch this to scifi or something. xD
Now that's what I'm talking about!! That was awesome!! Pat yourselves on the back
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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