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Natalie ventures into the Library
Fairy Flight (c) Nintendo
Really liked the artstyle. Now put some actual animation in it and you're good to go.
This was sweet and had a playful tone to it, but was too short to make much sense to me. I mean, I get it, she goes to the library...but suddenly a princess? I think this would have benefited from having a little more "meat" to it, just to expand on Natalie is and why there is a princess. I really liked the use of music to set the tone and the warm and homey feel the library had, but also everything kind of looks like it is made out of melting play-dough. Don't get me wrong, I like the good qualities here, but the detail in your animation still needs a little work, as does the pacing. Overall, I'm looking forward to seeing you develop your style, because with this you've shown good potential, but your talents need a little polishing.
Thank you so much for your response! The reason it doesn't make quite as much sense is because, well, its a little out of context. This is actually a panel for a webcomic (the url can be found in the contact info/website section on my profile) and I'm using newgrounds to host any flash files I couldn't normally support. I highly encourage that you check out the webcomic if you want to learn more! Also this is my first time using flash so I am extremely rusty, but thank you so much for your review and I hope I can improve from this point to put out even better quality pieces of work.
A story about finding your true calling.
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A young artist trapped in a boring job uses his imagination to escape from reality.
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