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The story of a young lad with an extraordinary gift.
I really didn't see that coming. I was expecting something tragic like that but not right away hahah. The ending made me laugh but try to make it more powerful or even climatic because it felt like it could have been a whole bunch better. Besides that, I liked it!
The vidoe lacks a proper ending. It just freezes on the last frame. Is a "The End" Screen too much to ask for?
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Okay, so this is a pretty original video as far as I can tell, so right off the bat, kudos to you for that. I take it that the intro song at the beginning of the video was purposely bad, so that's cool. Though what I don't understand is why some of the scenes of the video were "shaking." The house at the beginning and then the entryway to the kitchen during the shot of the living room. But that aside, the animation overall was pretty good. I liked that classic contrast of Dennis' Father's calm demeanor as Dennis is sitting their quietly freaking out because his father has no idea what's going on. Funny video, even if it was pretty short.
Thanks for the constructive feedback breh. Yeah, that "shaking" was supposed to be a slow-zoom. The images themselves were bitmap jammies I cooked up in Photoshop, so I suppose they don't always tween very smoothly. I'm still learning all of Flash's quirks, I've got a ways to go!
I think you just explained why vegan's exist.
So I'm not the only one who can hear them screaming...
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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