Jingles Suck!

Horrible. Even for 2004 this would've been sad. Your text was painted horribly, they have text tools dude. I can't bring myself to say anything more about this piece of crap.

My Final Verdict IS This Movie Sucks Ass!

Just because you used 2004 technology does not mean you also have to emulate the quality of the time. Jeez dude. How about fixing up your graphics and bringing in a loading screen? I recommend looking up some tutorials about making a flash, or even look up the guidelines here on NG. Perhaps your flash doesn't offend anyone, but I'm willing to bet a Washington that you didn't play back your work before uploading. Do try that next time while asking yourself "Will anyone really appreciate this?" and work from there.