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Jan 9, 2013 | 7:05 PM EST

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Just something I had been working on for the last few nights before I went to bed. Super simple but I figure I can keep going with it and eventually make it a long story.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Nice for something you did in one night. Some suggestions:
Pay attention to how your sticks move, and make it more fluid. Everything seemed to play very slowly. Experiment with easing and natural movement. Looking forward to your next one.

JspidermanP responds:

Thanks, I am very quickly realizing how hard it is to make stick animations look good. I was trying to make his climb look labored due to all the water working against him so I wanted it to look a bit slow, but I know what you mean, it does look very choppy. Thanks for the advice and I will work harder on his next round of training to make it look a lot smoother.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Title Explains alot
Not bad
You should make more like this

JspidermanP responds:

Thank you, I will.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

A fun loop, and the hair is amazing! I love watching it sway in the wind... Poor guy's got his work cut out for him though, there's a lot of training for him up ahead it would seem.

JspidermanP responds:

Thanks. Yes indeed. Being a ninja is never easy. I have a feeling it is only going to get worse for this poor sap ;).