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In this animation i experimented with various effects in order to portray the story. (Unfortunately the replay button needs to be fixed)
I actually enjoyed this! Some suggestions:
The stick figure moves pretty clumsily, and could have been animated with more fluidity. Adding sound would have made this much better also. Overall, you did good. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll get better.
needs sounds and maybe a voice for the guy... like when he hits his hand he could probably say "FUC*!! " or something like that the animation was alright.
Got some good ideas in this.
I advise working on character movement, how the characters body would react to certain impacts and how the character impacts his environment.
Also, sound. It's a big thing the leave out. Makes me feel like I'm watching one of those silent films from the early 1900's. Even they had a piano or something.
Needs audio.. but otherwise i kinda liked it
A funny and cool short.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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