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Jan 8, 2013 | 6:20 PM EST

Author Comments

In this animation i experimented with various effects in order to portray the story. (Unfortunately the replay button needs to be fixed)

Reviews


StobakStobak

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 9, 2013

I actually enjoyed this! Some suggestions:
The stick figure moves pretty clumsily, and could have been animated with more fluidity. Adding sound would have made this much better also. Overall, you did good. Keep practicing and I'm sure you'll get better.


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FearedSoulFearedSoul

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars January 8, 2013

needs sounds and maybe a voice for the guy... like when he hits his hand he could probably say "FUC*!! " or something like that the animation was alright.



BritishG4m3rBritishG4m3r

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 8, 2013

Got some good ideas in this.
I advise working on character movement, how the characters body would react to certain impacts and how the character impacts his environment.
Also, sound. It's a big thing the leave out. Makes me feel like I'm watching one of those silent films from the early 1900's. Even they had a piano or something.


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DarksideTDarksideT

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars January 8, 2013

Needs audio.. but otherwise i kinda liked it



DJ-DasCoolDJ-DasCool

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 8, 2013

A funny and cool short.