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this took way to long to release. it was a fun animation but because it
took so long i got a lot better before i finished it so i hate it forever, sorry. next shit i release will be 60,000 times better i promise sorta luv u
It was alright, the ending was really the best part. The animation was pretty good too.
giving it 1 star because you did put a little effort into it. My first gripe is the rating, this is by no means an "E" flash. Teen rating at least. Please rate your flash appropriately next time.
Next thing is the animation. it's a bit jerky and not really all that smooth. I suggest putting a bit more time into making the animation fluid next tiime. The artwork is so-so, i've seen much worse but also much better. Your line work is actually quite nice, but need to work on your proportions a bit more. e.g. some of the faces had wierd bumbs and wierd shapes to them.
Lastly, the sound quality. Sound quality could use a little improvement, but it was aight. honestly though, that accent was kind of annoying. sorry :P. Also you didnt really have to voice-over a narrative for everything that was going on. It's not a bad thing, but with better animation you could get away with minimal to no narrative on a piece like this. Look forward to seeing your next piece, especially if its 60,000 times better :P.
amazing story lmao
Decent art, and I like how the animation is relatively restrained despite the ridiculous subject matter. I thought it was pretty funny too, in a quirky way..." charming", I think is most appropriate.
The kid's (Swedish?) accents pretty much made the video, I don't think the narrative would have kept my attention otherwise.
I suppose my only real complaint is the lack of context, but even then I don't think that was the point of this. Anyway, I think you're onto something. Good job.
The sound quality AND animation is improving, you understand what you're doing right and what you're doing wrong, you're setting goals for yourself and you're still really hilarious. I see nothing I need to add/review- What else is there to say but "keep up the good work"?
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
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