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Stormtroopers Marshall and Kyle are starting today on a positive note! I hope every thing works out for them.
*Edit* Daily Third & Front Page! Thanks so much - so honored to appear in those slots -
( Thanks for checkin out the vid, I've always had a weird obsession with stormtroopers so this was a blast to make)
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I thought you did a very good job on the animnation, but the jokes were pretty bland to me. Maybe it's because I'm not a die hard Star Wars fan. Anyways keep up the good work.
yeah... Most of the jokes are pretty direct references from the movies, but I'm glad you were able to enjoy it anyways!
this needs a series. (not a very original comment i guess)
this should be a full series! people love this stuff (including me)
Fantastic! I loved the comedy, the jokes were great, even people who aren't into star wars would probably get a laugh out of this. You should really consider making a sequel/series. Just a minute and 37 seconds long and I'm already on the edge of my seat wondering what happens next!
Apart from a scene or two, for example the scene with the red horned guy getting a glass thrown at his face, and the tone of voice of some of the speakers at times, I thoroughly enjoyed that piece. The scene seemed to break the flow of conversation between the two stormtroopers. Personally, I'd just have replaced the example scene with a loud audible shout of agony following the glass throw. I would also have changed the tone of voice on Kyle at times, maybe added some stammering for realism, and would have cut out the helmet voice masking just a tad, it almost sounded static-y. Finally I'd make the cousin's voice slightly... different. Mocking, older, maybe?
Apart from that, it's been a while since I've seen a funny simple conversation video done right. And as an aside, maybe a clip of the death star exploding at the end would have been a nice touch. Seeing as they just relocated onboard.
I thought about including something like the death star exploding at the end or possibly their tombstones next to a replay button - but I decided against it because I didn't want to spoon feed the joke are anything like that
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