The first flash alive from 2013.
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A MiscritsFic: LAST FEATHER
Khan and his new winged ally Soren journey back home from the mysterious lands of Aerobia, but how will this new partner allow Soren to spread his wings and fly?
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The point of a movie is so I can watch and not do anything. The clicking makes this impossible.
MiscritsQuest responds:
k ill add auto next time
i really love the art style. but thats it.
also congrats on first submission of 2013
couple suggestions: put some background music or something, just clicking while reading with no sound is kind of boring. put more time into the characters, specifically the closeups. give them visible reactions to the dialogue itself. If you are going to do something like this with no voice, these 2 things are really necessary for it to be a decent piece. Sorry for the low rating, but im just being honest.