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Dec 30, 2012 | 7:12 PM EST
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Warning It's pretty long XD, It's about 12 minutes long.

This is the First Episode to my original on-going series. It took me a while to complete. Inspired from alot of places. The first episode was more of a test episode to see what style of animation is best to complete an episode quickly but effectively (and to get some experience with non-sprite animating).

I also have to give special thanks shout out to ALL MY VOICE ACTORS!!!! because without you this wouldn't be possible.

and to everyone else.... let me know what you think ^^

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Reviews


SuperX77SuperX77

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

i like this it reminded me of xin and Rojay the Legend of the Dragons, relay smooth good job


MOA-OZZY responds:

Xin and what? lol google time n_n. ooohhhh thanks. It won't be too much like xin... because of super powers and all. It will get better in the second episode


jecjokerjecjoker

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Decent story line with it obvious of what your inspirations were.
The animation is a bit blocky and it seems as if your still thinking in sprites XD


MOA-OZZY responds:

XD yeah you're right, I'm slowly becoming a non-sprite animator so it's all good :), learning to draw when you've never drawn before is hard, but I'm way better now than I was before.


ghostree23ghostree23

Rated 4 / 5 stars

you spelled a bunch of the subtitles wrong, I had huge problems with the facial proportions in a number of scenes, and what was with the immediate collateral damage from the landing? i mean who was that guy? was he just an extra?
apart from that it was reasonable. it flows a lot like most anime especially how all the characters keep saying ominous junk and rarely explain anything. don't get me wrong that's sometimes a plus. anyway if you could step up the art and subtitles a bit for episode 2 I'd be happy to give it a 5. as for this one i enjoyed it, but it wasn't all it could have been so i feel a 4 is appropriate.

as a side note for all you grammar [german soldiers during the years of WWII] reading this and getting pissed off at my lack of capitalization of the first letter of every sentence and maybe a few i's here and there, thanks for caring.


MOA-OZZY responds:

looool the first scene with that guy was the first ever non-sprite animation I ever did XD. I decided to leave it in because it brings back memories and it made me laugh. As for spelling and stuff. some of the things said were in slang so I wrote it in slang. And I put most of it through spell check on microsoft word... oh well, next episode wont have as much spelling mistakes hopefully.


FuZaKe-JesterFuZaKe-Jester

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

pretty interestig, animation is basic but well put, everything was pretty good except some of the dialogue like kai didnt know what the value of money was but he some how knew what a movie is? but other than the small stuff like that i can't wait for episode 2


MOA-OZZY responds:

Thanks :), of course there's a reason for Kai's... Half knowledge of the world you'll just have to watch the rest to find out


DieselDixonDieselDixon

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The truth is liked it most of it. The animation was decent but needs work. The faces are odd sometimes. Good news is your plot is intriguing. All compelling characters except the director i din't see the whole point of the "kai the destroyer" but i suppose that's how you bring Kai and the antagonist of the series. Overall it's a good test episode I look forward to episode 2.


MOA-OZZY responds:

Antagonist.... thanks I just learnt a new word, I feel smarter already :). Yeah the first episode turned out as predicted and it gives leeway for the rest of the series. There are many possibilities that I wish to exploit in Kriesis