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Please give me some tips, this is my first flash animation.
The animation was decent, if a bit choppy here and there, but you must have a shitty microphone, as the voices just sounded terrible. That's only a minor complaint, though, as the rest of the flash holds up well enough.
Oh, and try not to let it loop next time. That's a bit amateur. Not that I know how to stop it from looping.
For a first time animation it was relatively decent. All I can say is keep practicing.
good drawings! it almost had a plot, keep working on your writing skills or collaborate with someone next time. i love the detailed kitty face, reminds me of Ricardio the Heart Guy from Adventure Time. Keep animating!
look up the command for stop(allsounds)
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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