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Dec 30, 2012 | 4:18 AM EST

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SECOND PART OF SMZX EP2 FINISHED, THE MARIO STORY
UPDATE: CHANGED COUPLE OF THINGS IN THE FIRST SCENE
ENJOY
and I DON'T WANNA HEAR OR READ THAT MY GRAMMAR SUCKS

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dragonmaster2234dragonmaster2234

Rated 5 / 5 stars March 24, 2013

Aside from the grammar the story is decent. The sprite work is good and the soundtrack is also good.


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thelads1thelads1

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars December 30, 2012

Damn, that is exactly what I was gonna say.
Yes, you haven't bothered to fix that problem. If you want more respect, you should try to improve on what we comment about. It makes no sense to ignore what bothers people who watch this.
Your grammar isn't the ONLY thing that sucks. so does your story/plot.
Like, you practically STOLE the plot for Mario & Luigi: Partners in Time! I've played the game enough times to notice that. You also used such original fighting scenes and characters.
You've taken a bunch of failed SMBZ copies and created the king!
An example is the yoshi versus chaos beast fight.
Firstly, the fact that yoshi is protecting one of many precious items from this guy is making the yoshi versus mecha sonic battle lame!
I'll leave out the Dark Star, Cobalt Star, and other problems out of the way, assuming you're ignoring this.
To make things simple, you've just copied an episode of Super Mario Bros. Z (if you think that's all I have to complain about, I have plenty more to nag about!).



teejay-number13teejay-number13

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars December 30, 2012

Your grammar sucks. There you didn't hear it, you JUST READ IT! HAHAHA! Also caps.

Anyway, my only real gripe with this is you're introducing way too many characters and half of them are just Sonic edits. You've got the seven star beasts, the 8 chaos beasts, traditional Mario characters, and I'm guessing Megaman and Sonic characters are going to show up eventually. The soundtrack was at least good I thought.