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Dec 26, 2012 | 12:03 AM EST
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Animated by Chris Niosi
Written by Chris Niosi and Liz Losey
Music by Weston Durant
Background Artwork by Dave Smith, Jourdan Lasko and Terrence Lepinski
Voices by Anna Kingsley, Sarah Williams, Apphia Yu, Chris Zito, Erica Mendez, Dave Smith and Liz Losey.

Flamegirl spends a day out with her gal-pals Saturndiva and Whyti in ;Mechcity one day, when the girls are approached by a strange salesman who tempts them with addictive minigames. Will our heroines see through his SINISTER PLOT of ripping them off, or will it take some well-aimed projectiles to burn through the minigame madness!?

Reviews


heiki753heiki753

Rated 2 / 5 stars

Yeah. Entertaining, good ideas, but too long, too pointless. Especially not a flash vid I wanna see on the last day of the year to make some minutes go by



heatfire0heatfire0

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Love it. What's the Opening song though?


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xilefianxilefian

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Boring story, a lot of standing around and talking to ease up the animation work-load (Which looks rather low quality...), seems like an attempt at emulating Japanese anime which would be rather childish if it were true.

Dodgy Australian accent made me throw up, like, literally. I'm not even Australian and now I need to clean my computer keyboard. Thanks for that.

Constructive criticism:
Improve on the animation quality! Could be massively improved, the eyes are weird looking, body parts seem deformed, the mouth animations look really sloppy.

Think of a better story...Are these players in a game playing games in a game? A truly gripping tale indeed.........

Get someone to review the dialogue, it's all-talk with no personality and the voices that go with them try to tie in some anime-style tropes.

Finally, "TOME", Terrain of Magical Expertise, what a ridiculously terrible title! Did someone just blurt out random sounds until they hit TOME and decided to backronym a title out of it? "TERRAIN" and "EXPERTISE" are the most ridiculous parts of the title, did no-one wake up one morning and think 'Perhaps we should think of a name that hints at some intelligence behind the writing'? Even removing those two words makes it sound better "Of Magical" on it's own sounds instantly cooler than "TERRAIN of magical EXPERTISE".

There are some good skill-sets but it all needs reshuffling and re-identifying.



goomba64rondagoomba64ronda

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I think I just learn't a valueable lesson



masterjon3masterjon3

Rated 5 / 5 stars

madness??? THIS IS SPARTA!!!!
but yeah, tome is always good