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Dec 26, 2012 | 12:03 AM EST
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Animated by Chris Niosi
Written by Chris Niosi and Liz Losey
Music by Weston Durant
Background Artwork by Dave Smith, Jourdan Lasko and Terrence Lepinski
Voices by Anna Kingsley, Sarah Williams, Apphia Yu, Chris Zito, Erica Mendez, Dave Smith and Liz Losey.

Flamegirl spends a day out with her gal-pals Saturndiva and Whyti in ;Mechcity one day, when the girls are approached by a strange salesman who tempts them with addictive minigames. Will our heroines see through his SINISTER PLOT of ripping them off, or will it take some well-aimed projectiles to burn through the minigame madness!?



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Wow! What an honor it is to be your first reviewer! First, I'd like to begin by saying what a huge fan I am of you and your team. ToME is a smashing success in combining top-notch art, gaming, and a riveting plot to bring us all a luminous multimedia experience that could entertain one for days.

Now, about this flash in particular, the animation and characters were on par with my expectations, no surprise there, but I was expecting a little bit more effort in furthering the actual storyline. In fact, I'd say that this hilarious escapade falls in the realm of what is called a "filler scene." Unless there's some foreshadowing present that I am missing, or a subtle cue to connect this scene firmly to the previous that I failed to notice, there was no reason to make something like this.

Don't get me wrong; I'm not saying that it's totally unacceptable for one to meander from the original story here or there, one or two side arcs is fine. However, if one gets into the habit of grinding out many of these often, the frame of the story can seem bloated, and/or watered down, to the point that it can become frustrating to watch(e.g.: Naruto). I hope that you'll take this in good spirits, and continue doing whatever you think is best for the series. Godspeed, Kirbopher and friends! May your work be ever fruitful, and your successes boundless!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

A very good little episode, while the minigame part did get me focused and laughing, I also liked the advancement of the plot as well. I also liked the design for the admin, it took me a second to realize why the character looked so different, but then I realized it. You have very good character design; I set them apart without having to be told directly. Always happy to be your fan, and see your work, will wait as long as I need for the next episode!

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Whyti is freaking adorable, and I love this new episode, so incredibly awesome
the story over all is so immersing, and each episode is always better than the last
anticipating for the next one!

And a belated Merry Christmas/happy new year to Kirb & the TOME staff :)

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

Love it so beautifull :D

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Rated 5 / 5 stars

That was interesting, an other side of TOME we didn't know, and I like how it is tied to the last episode, you always put effort in your work even for minor things.
The TOME universe is still growing and I love every part of it !

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