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In this episode, Mark learns to hate Greg even more!
This show is inspired by my very real job at CVS. The characters look a little bit better in episode 3. Enjoy!
I don't want to sound like a tool, but for some of you, I want to say this: Under three stars? Really? For some of the stuff that passes for 2 stars and even 3 stars, it seems very harsh.
Great stuff! Good animations and cool looking people, and good voice acting.
The actual animation does not appear to be your biggest obstacle. I could pick things apart, but in essence I believe the audio is causing you the most trouble here. It sounds like you've got a combination of bad compression settings in flash and a microphone that doesn't do the recordings justice.
Otherwise, not a bad entry, from a technical standpoint.
this was quite helpful, actually. I'm not just clicking the helpful button at random.
You should really significalty cut down on your intro sequence. You're going to lose someone with a long and boring intro sequence. The episode was also boring as well ut I think there's potential here.
I see what your saying, but on the other hand the show is named after the song, and if someone can't wait through the intro sequence (which does need improvement, I'll give you that) then I don't know if they'll appreciate the low-key humor anyway.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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