Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
4:00 min runtime
made in 250 hours
This is similar to my "Heart of Stone" film but with more depth
I wanted to push myself with this one, doing more full animation.
Thanks for front paging me :)
Hm..Not sure if that is snow where is written-CREATURE-
or if is blood...
It's supposed to be symbolic of the fleshly being made pure.
Thanks for reviewing ;)
Lets take a look at this.
First the animation. It was good not the best but still good and you can tell there was effort put in it so I'll give you points there. I mean I'm not an animator but I can still tell when some one cared for what they were doing.
Next the over all look. Wile it was fairly simple, I can't help but feel you didn't put a lot of thought in to it. You start with a well detailed severed arm and then don't keep with that same detail in everything elss. I know it would have ben difficult but so is life. It's just feels a little half assed or like the arm should have ben less to match the rest on the film.
Finally the story. Now I have only to real complaints with it, but I'll save them for the end. I found the story over all to be great. I got what was going on even with no dialog. The Idea was great and the tree with all the things on it was very moving. the middle is were I liked it the most. To show suffering like that and have it mean something. But then that leads me to my complaints. You could have ended it there. He dies for them THE END. Your meaning would have ben better and I wouldn't feel so cheated out of something deep. This is not something you put a happy ending on. This is something to make people feel something big and suffering and loss is one of the best ways. Next the part from the Bible. Now I'm not to religus but I do know the Bible well. I also feel one should not try to copy it in such a small way. This just dus not do it credit is all.
Well that about it. Not bad but not grate. 3 starts.
Yeah I think I just wanted to get the point across that mutilating people is bad... but yeah that was bad continuity, thanks ;)
Yeah I agree, I just wanted to get as much of the message in 4 minutes as I could.
Thanks for your review ;)
Really Amazing, took me a while into the video to understand what was going on but, atsoon as he was strapped to the tree completeley understood the context of what was happening, great representation.
Thanks, and hopefully people will look past the representation and into the reality. ;D
I thought it was very deep and meaningful all the way up until the new monster turned back into a human, I feel like the whole animation fell apart when he looked up and smiled. It looked really cartoon-ish from that point forward, I feel like you should have continued on more of a seroius path. I also wasnt a fan of the change in music, that might have also played a part in the cartoony ending. But other than that I thought it was very good and had a great storyline, including the ending and through the cartoony part even if it was religious I thought it was a neat way to mix religion and horror. Overall good job! I give you 3.5 Stars.
People have rights to believe what ever they desire and you're being a total jerk if you judge others 'cause of their beliefs. Perhaps the creator is just proud to be christian so he made this piece of art for us to enjoy.. and if you have any kindness in your heart, you won't judge his work so harshly.
I'm just some plain agnostic and I thought this was pretty interesting flash, that's all.
Sure you can't force a belief, it needs to be understood as truth to the individual, then the belief is recieved. I'm just putting it out there, you choose to accept it or not.
And I don't mind judgements as long as they are intelligible.
Thanks for your review :)
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.