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Dec 8, 2012 | 7:36 PM EST

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

Nice panning and music, would only suggest more ambient sounds with a lighter ochestra, otherwise maybe a bit more on different forms of life and it'd be amazing but, it is deserving of it's place here on Newgrounds and that is a fact.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Hmm. There wasn't really a clear concept in this flash, so I guess I'll just review it based on its visuals. I don't like the use of a bitmap as a background - a vector background would do this piece of animation more justice. However, your choice in the bitmap was good.

The use of movie clips felt awkward and uncanny. They just went from one key drawing to another key drawing, no inbetweening or anything. Simply inbetweening this would be a good remedy. I liked the shark at the end. That was a nice touch and nicely done to boot.

Overall it could use some work, but you're doing a good job. Keep up the good work.

dArJones responds:

i have had flash for 3 weeks any more tips/hints you could give me would be greatly appreciated thank you so much for your input