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Chance and Ineptitude 1

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Dec 3, 2012 | 5:19 AM EST

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Abby walks around the cold streets of an old town, what will become of her this time?

Wow, never thought I'd put the next one up.
Anyway long story with this. Last October I finished editing the script and editing the panels for this chapter. Celx helped with the programing, and of course he had other things to take care of so this was pushed aside. I forgot about this until he brought it up a few months ago. It's going to be divided into 4 parts, and this chapter will conclude.
The art is VERY outdated in this. The rest of the parts will have the outdated are, but when the third chapter comes it'll look more like what I've been putting out.
Anyway I hope you all enjoy. More to come.

Again thanks for all the help Celx.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

It was a simply showed yet incredibly well done story. I'm the artist myself in real life, which makes me more amused by your art style. The way you draw the faces and how you put so much "effort" into making those drawings, these are just great.
If there was any chance from you to finish what you started, I would be pleased and filled with joy.

Theonewithoutaname responds:

gosh this is an old story. it's funny taking another look at it. everything about this is outdatd but amusing to look at. I've debated going back and finishing the story. the guy who helped with the programing has his own projects and that's how this stayed unfinished. maybe when he's done we can finish this crap again..


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Again I applaud your work. The art and story really reflects the time and effort you put into these things. Though not much happened in this episode, the setup was flawless and the emotional investment was created flawlessly. The complexity that you have already established for this vampire character really puts me on the edge of my seat with how this particular situation will be handled. I'm only sad that I will have to wait for the next installment.

I would like the opportunity to appreciate the art in them a bit more though. Could you perchance make the following episodes a touch larger?


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Excellent work!

Your drawing style is quite unique and beautiful. Cool storytelling. And: You have used one of my absolutely favourite tracks on ng (thx again to blazing dragon for having composed it!).

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Best wishes



Rated 4 / 5 stars

I was really impressed with the feel of the whole thing! I mean the speech bubbles could use a bit of sprucing up to match the rest but i really liked the writing and the images and how the music fit in. It would be even better if this was the storyboard for an animation but I really like it!

Theonewithoutaname responds:

I agree with oyu on the speech bubbles, but celx (guy who did programing) has a lot on his plate. I think the most important part are the drawings and words. As long as everyone can understand both I'm good. If I was an animator I'd do more, but again that's not my forte. Thank you for the review and watching this.

With love.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

The music goes really well with it. Hope to see more

Theonewithoutaname responds:

There's going to be 3 more parts coming soon, and maybe a 3rd chapter if everything's ok. :)